Help needed

[liliaeth]

I got a sad short Spike ficlet, due to my broken spuffy hearts of hearing everyone think that Buffy would never choose Spike. (might be the first bit of a series, don't know yet)

I need someone to give it a look over and tell me if it's ok, interesting enough, and wether or not I got Spike utterly and completely ooc.

Anyone feel like vollunteering?