I've been looking forward to reading this story ever since I first saw the summary for it on the artist claims!!! I really enjoyed the story, such a cool concept and I love the Bobby-Dean relationship! I do have to agree with some of the other commenters regarding the epilogue....whereas an epilogue should be kinda of a capstone to a story, this one kinda produced more questions than it answered. I think just renaming the section "Teaser" for the sequel (which I am SOO incredibly stoked to read by the way) would probably make it more easily accepted by the readers. But really, really wonderful job! Love this story!
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Date: 2011-08-06 04:00 pm (UTC)