Just read the whole story. I liked it. Writing quality needs a bit of work, but it's not bad. The meaning is clear, just the writing itself needs tweaking in a few places. You are one up on me anyway, though, with actually writing down your ideas, so I shouldn't nag on that :) I apologize. Since this chapter seems to be the newest, I was wondering if you were gonna write more of it or leave it a wip. It *is* March already.
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Date: 2006-03-16 06:17 pm (UTC)Since this chapter seems to be the newest, I was wondering if you were gonna write more of it or leave it a wip. It *is* March already.