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liliaeth ([personal profile] liliaeth) wrote2009-12-19 08:44 pm
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Fic: Eat it Twilight (16/16)

Title: Eat it Twilight
Author Name: [livejournal.com profile] liliaeth
Artists Name: [livejournal.com profile] lightthesparks
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] runriggers, [livejournal.com profile] just_ruth, [livejournal.com profile] faithburke
Summary: The BAU has to deal with a serial killer who believes he's hunting vampires. The unsub's name, Dean Winchester.
Genre: Supernatural/Criminal Minds crossover
Warnings: death of children, religious themes, violence
Pairing: not an issue
Rating: PG 13
Disclaimer: I don't own either, no matter how much I might want to
Notes: Spoilers for s5 of CM and SPN
















16.













“And to think Sammy, Ruby’s host must have felt just as sick when Ruby slept with you. Can you even imagine her screams?”

Sam held back his emotions, the urge to throw up. He could barely hold back from strangling the bitch. That’s what she wanted. For him to get angry, to try something, anything, knowing it’d be useless.

She’d already killed one of the feds, he couldn’t let her kill the remaining three.

He could hear Reid breathing harshly in the background, Hotch, Hotchner was unconscious, and Johnny was bleeding all over his hands.

“Her body, it belonged to a coma victim. She was braindead.”

“What? You thought that made a difference. Really Sammy? How stupid can you be?”

Was she lying, or was this one of those cases where the truth hurt worse than the lie?

“Can you feel it, Sammy? My father is coming.”

“I thought you said Azazel was your father?” It was more of an attempt at distraction than anything else. “Or is this one of those, out of sight out of mind kinda things.”

“I killed for you.” The guy, Vinnie, started up again. He still hadn’t got the message. Sam couldn’t help thinking he’d killed demons for Ruby, killed that nurse for Ruby. Part of it had been to kill Lilith, but he’d… come to like her, trusted her.

“And you did it so nicely. Will you do it for me again Vinnie? I might let you kiss Marissa again, if you will.” The man looked so desperate. “Pick any of the feds Vinnie, and kill him.” Harsher, “kill him!”

Sam stared at the man, he couldn’t be serious. “She’s not Marissa you moron. Didn’t you listen?”

“I’m sorry.” Vinnie ignored him, “But it’s the only way to make her love me again.” Like a kid, apologizing that it was taking a flower out of mom’s favorite bouquet.

Sam got up, ready to stop him. “No, don’t!”

Vinnie pulled out a gun and started aiming it at the fed on the ground.

“Ow Vinnie, you can do better than that, that one’s half dead already.” She sounded so sugary sweet that it might as well bore holes through Sam’s teeth. But this was serious as Vinnie changed the direction of his gun and aimed at Reid.

“For you, Marissa.”

Sam managed to jump on him. A shot still got away. “Oh God, no.” he looked up, expecting to see drops of blood flooding the floor. Instead he could feel the bullet ricocheting, back to the door, towards Meg. It kicked the demon right into the door and off her feet.

Reid fell to the floor, joined by Hotch and Sam ran over to help him up. Reid was already trying his phone again. “Federal officers down, federal officers down. Garber Airfield, officer down!”Then both he and Sam were smacked against the wall. Sam fought it, but ever since Lucifer had risen, he had no power left to fight with. He hated himself for wanting it back.






*****












Prentiss came running up to him, Derek barely managing to sit up before a paramedic pushed him back down. “It’s Hotch and Reid, they’re in trouble.” Derek tried to get up again.

“Don’t even think about it.” The medic stated. “You’ve got a concussion. If you try and get up now, you’ll just fall down before you get to your car.”

Derek tried to protest, but no one was listening. Prentiss was already ordering the police towards the station. There was no one left but her, not since they’d somehow been knocked out and Winchester had gotten away from them.

By the time they’d come too, Miller had been muttering something about an archangel and absolution. None of it made the least bit of sense.

Winchester was gone, their unsub was dead, killed by Winchester, and from the looks of it, the local police would be finding corpses for days. He pet the small terrier that had joined him in the ambulance, wondering where it came from, before he was finally driven off to the hospital.

How much worse could things possibly go wrong?







*******













Dean drove more desperately than even he was used to. They needed to get to Sammy and all Cas could say was that he was supposed to have arrived at the airfield hours ago. Cas had suggested just bringing them there, and for a moment, Dean had been tempted. But no, if they did that, they’d have to leave the weapons behind and march unprepared into an unknown situation. Bobby would beat the crap out of him if he even considered doing something that stupid.

He parked the car and moved on through the darkness. He almost stepped on one of the bodies. The man’s entire chest was covered in blood, his brains blown out. The crucifix around his neck was covered in blood. Another body was holding on to a bible. He didn’t dare count the bodies. He heard a gunshot and pulled out his gun. It wasn’t easy to stay in the dark, when you were dressed in bright orange, but somehow, he managed it. He was just that awesome.

“One of them was touched by an angel, and recently at that.”
Dean pulled back in shock when Cas appeared right in front of that. Gee Cas, give a man a heart attack, why don’t you.


Then Castiel's words settled and Dean recalled his conversation with Zachariah: one of his angels had been in touch with the group, probably through their leader.
“March on Christian soldiers.” Dean whispered. “Until your fricking angels get you killed.” Dean wondered if it was the angel who’d told them to kill the cops who’s uniforms some of them were wearing. An angel or something else.

“There is a demon inside the building.”Castiel managed to sound urgent, well more so than he usually did. He really needed to get the guy to relax one of these days, preferably without pharmaceuticals. A nice long drinking game maybe?

“And you couldn’t say that first?” Priorities, Cas, please. “So what about Sam?”

“He is there as well.”

“Then let’s get to it. I tell you Cas, I can’t leave that kid alone for a minute, without him getting into trouble.”

“I thought that it was your actions with the vampires that got you both into trouble.” The angel said, somewhat confused.

“Tomato, tomatho.”

Then Cas blinked out of sight. Dean just followed him in, hoping he’d still get there in time.







******












What happened next made him pray, really pray, not just pretend pray, for the first time in years. Doctor Spencer Reid, skeptic, scientist, sane, please let me be sane, prayed.

It was a bright light, somewhat shaped in the form of a man, but a twisted man, dark and light and a song, a beautiful song rupturing the air around him. Reid felt himself stare at the ‘being’ as if he was looking at salvation. Then it stepped truly into the room and a man appeared, dressed in a cheap suit and a trench coat that had seen better days.

“Let them go now.”

“Why, are you going to make me? Try, please”

The newcomer faced off with the girl when the door burst open and Winchester came through, holding a shotgun. He didn’t even wait to start shooting, hitting the girl in the stomach.

“My oh my, if it isn’t Dean Winchester. Come to the rescue?” The girl wiped the blood off of her mouth. She didn’t sound quite as certain as she was trying to sound.

The guy in the trench coat was kneeling next to Sam and before Reid could even blink, Sam’s shackles dropped to the floor. The next both the guy in the trench coat and Agent Martins were gone. He could barely remember Sam saying something about getting him out first.

The stranger was back before Dean had even managed to reload his shotgun. This time he appeared right next to the girl, his hand on her head. The girl screamed and Reid figured, that no, he really was insane, when a black smoke erupted from the girl’s mouth and her body fell limp.

Sam and Dean looked at one another, they didn’t say a word, just stood there staring. Then Dean put his hand on Sam’s shoulder and pointed at the door.

They were gone before he came too.




















“Sam.” Sam was sitting on the hood of the Impala. He hadn’t even dared look at Dean. Dean in return didn’t know how to face his brother. He’d planned to call him sooner. He had. But then Sam hadn’t picked up his phone anymore. And the situation with the vampires had come up.

It was his fault. If only he hadn’t been a fool and cast Sam out with that last phone call.

And now they were both wanted again, with the cops at their heels and Lucifer after Sam’s ass.
He swallowed and faced his brother. Sam closed his eyes and got up. Dean pulled out Ruby’s knife and held it in his hands. Sam almost flinched, but he didn’t move. Hadn’t he taught the boy better than that?

“If you’re serious,” Dean said, “ if you want back in. You should hang on this. I’m sure you’re rusty.” The look of relief on Sam’s face sat in front of him and Dean hated himself that he had ever made Sam doubt him like this. Things might never be the same again, but this was Sam, his Sam, still. He handed over Ruby’s knife. But even that wouldn’t be enough. “I’m sorry, I don’t know, whatever I need to be, because I was wrong.” For sending you out, for not keeping on to you, for making you think I’d ever hurt you. “I should have known better.”

“What made you change your mind.”Sam sat back down, the knife still in his hands. Dean could see the fear that if Dean changed his mind once, he might change it again. Dean was set to prove him wrong, set for anything.

“Long story.”Dean humphed and shrugged. “The point is, maybe we are each other’s Achilles heels, maybe they’ll find a way to use us against each other. I don’t know. I just know, we’re all we’ve got. More than that, we keep each other human.” And maybe with Sam here, he might have found a way to save more of those girls.

“Thank you, really, thank you. I won’t let you down.”

But it wasn’t Sam who had let him down. Not that he could say that. So instead, “I know, you are the second best hunter on the planet.”

“So what do we do now?” Live?>

“We make our own future.” No matter how shitty it might be

“I guess we don’t have a choice.”


















By the time Reid came too, he was lying in the hospital. The doctors were mostly concerned about the strain on his leg and the bruised ribs he had. They said it looked as if he’d been forced into something.

He wanted to tell them he’d been kicked into the ceiling without ever being touched, but didn’t feel like getting himself an invitation to the psych unit. Hotch barely remembered what had happened to get him knocked out. Reid figured he was lucky. They’d put him and Morgan in the same room and the guy might be one of his best friends, but if he wasn’t going to shut up about the food, Reid would… he would… Sometimes he wished he had an older brother to teach him about pranks to play on annoying coworkers.

Of course that probably would have meant being the victim of those pranks during most of childhood… It was worth considering.

Morgan was on the phone, talking to the Rockford police station. Something about a missing boy, and sending through his file. Derek had sat there, staring at the laptop until the file came through. When he saw the picture, it looked like… Derek didn’t say a word, not right away. He just there, staring at the picture before he closed down his laptop. His eyes teared up, but he didn’t make a sound. He dabbed away the tears and laid down, probably still hurting from the concussion, and being woken up every hour or so. Reid wasn’t sure if he heard him right. “We got him Daniel, we got him.”

Reid lay in his own bed, trying not to think. He’d tried to ask about the case, but all he’d got out of Hotch was that it was a full scale disaster. The Winchesters and Novak had escaped. Clarissa Burns and her boyfriend were both dead, killed by Winchester and the local police was still digging up bodies out of the woods behind Burns’ home.

Sheriff Miller had resigned his office, before anyone had been able to ask it of him. He said he needed time to look after his daughter. She was in therapy, no one dared to even mention a possible trial. As far as they could see, Burns and her boyfriend had pretty much drugged and brainwashed the girls into going along with them. They were victims, pure and simple. Simple for everyone, but the girl who was still torn apart with guilt.

Hotch had been called in by Strauss. Reid didn’t think it sounded good.

Reid sat there, staring at something impossible that Rossi had given him to keep his mind occupied until he was released. Something…

It was two pictures, of the same skull. One taken a week ago, one today. Both were pictures of the teeth and specifically the gums of one Alicia Johnson. The newest picture was… normal. For that of a body that had lay in the freezer for a week. But the first one… Reid couldn’t stop staring at the spare teeth, no fangs, that came out of the gums, as the coroner pushed his fingers against the flesh.

The man had planned to build his career on this. He’d documented every second of his investigation. Then all of a sudden the girl’s gums had returned to normal and the only proof he had left was the pictures he’d taken and one tooth, one fang that Reid was holding now, that he’d removed for inspection.

Reid stared at it.

“No way.”












The End

[identity profile] mangacat201.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIii... that was MARVELOUS, great, fantastic end, leaving it all open for the dear feds not to believe anything *g* I hope Dean's metabolism didn't suffer too much from all the zipping though. HAch.... I want MORE CM-xovers.
Can you make another?
Cat

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[identity profile] mulder200.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
This was awesome! When the Winchesters blow into town, nothing is ever the same.
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[personal profile] amaresu 2009-12-23 06:17 am (UTC)(link)
This was awesome. I believe it's my favorite Criminal Minds/Supernatural crossover. Utterly wonderful. I really liked the way you separated out the different story lines. This was a good fun read.

Also the html from part 15 to part 16 is messed up. There is an extra " in the link. Just to let you know.

[identity profile] unholygrace.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 07:18 am (UTC)(link)
Eek~ I love you for writing this. Lovely, wonderful and epic story, this is.

[identity profile] claudiapriscus.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Damn! That was ridiculously, ridiculously fantastic. So well plotted, such fantastic characterizations...it was truly compulsive reading. It was everything I could ever want out of a spn/investigator show crossover.

[identity profile] tygerc.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 10:28 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this was truly amazing.

[identity profile] pinkphoenix1985.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
this is brilliant!

[identity profile] thelxiepia.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
This was awesome! I was on the edge of my seat through the entire thing. :)

[identity profile] iyalode.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness. Thank you for great read. Wonderful engaging storyline. I'm terribly impressed you allowed the BAU to retain their deniability, great call and the story is better because of it. Although I'm uncertain Reid's ginormous brain is going to allow him to not pursue matters regarding this mother, but I suspect he'd keep that quiet.

Awesome story.

[identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG OMG OMG WHAT A RIDE!!!!

I was grateful that when I came across this you have posted the fic in its entirety or I would simply burst if I had to wait for the next installment. Seriously, what ever it was you were mainlining when you wrote this, keep on taking it cos it makes for awesome plotting, writing and characterisation that helps muffle the pain of the hiatus.

*hugs!*

Thank you so much for writing!

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[personal profile] seraphina_snape 2009-12-23 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome story. I skipped lunch just so I could finish reading it before I had to head off to work.

~ sera

[identity profile] jujuberry136.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Really awesome story! I loved the multiple story lines and how you managed to jump from each without compromising the flow of the story. LOVED the title, there were too many funny lines to quote, and I really liked how you ended this- the FBI ignoring the supernatural aspects (well, Reid may be doing some off hour investigations) and the Winchesters brushing off their latest run-in with the law.

Great job tying in recent plot developments for both shows!

[identity profile] phorenice.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved this a lot!
Thanks for sharing.

[identity profile] redrikki.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent crossover. You really had the Criminal Minds folks, Dean and Castiel, but for some reason Sam's babble-fest and speech patterns seemed a little off to me. The thing I enjoyed most about this though was that none of the Criminal Minds people had a why-yes-all-this-supernatural-stuff-is-quite-real moment. Much more plausible and much less cliche that way.

[identity profile] ladyoneill.livejournal.com 2009-12-23 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never watched Criminal Minds but I was able to follow this with no problem and I loved it. So very well written, cohesive, and plotty! A grand adventure!
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[personal profile] saphirablue 2009-12-23 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow! What a great read! I really enjoyed this story! :)

I'm really glad that I read this fic even though I'm only up to Season 3 of Supernatural (watched Dean dying and going to hell last week) and only have seen the first and second, maybe third, season of Criminal Minds. But I know enough of Season 4 and 5 of Supernatural (damn spoilers - can't let my fingers from them... ;)) and of the characters of Criminal Minds so that I could follow the fic (ok, sometimes a big question mark would hang over my head (who is Rossi? Sam and Dean seperate? Lucifers/Michaels Vessel? *argh* Don't tell me)).

I like that it is open to the reader if they think that some of the CMs now believe the Winchesters or not.

Thank you very much for this fic!

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[identity profile] daylightfire.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
I feel like I've spent a good portion of my day just reading this story and it was completely worth it. I've always enjoyed Supernatural crossovers with shows like Criminal Minds (with cops/feds trying to figure out the Winchesters)and this is definitely the best one I've read. Not only is it set in season five (and has Castiel!) which I love, but this story is wonderfully written with so many different details and layers and great characterization. Thanks for the awesome story! :)

[identity profile] hildigunnur.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
This was a great read. Very enthralling. Great characterization overall. I really liked this fic.

[identity profile] hells-half-acre.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 06:05 am (UTC)(link)
This was great! I've never watched Criminal Minds, but I'm a sucker for Supernatural-Cop/Law interaction. It's really nicely done here. I like that for most of the story you really can see the Winchesters from the CM point of view - from the possible psychosis to the water steaming just because of the girl's body temperature in the cold room.

Very neat. I especially like that you pulled Cas in to be interrogated as well.

[identity profile] lemmealone.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 11:27 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this was FUN. Loved the mooshing of these two canons. Very, very nicely done. *g*

[identity profile] hopefulwriter27.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 01:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome story. I love stories where Dean and Sam are analyzed by the members of the BAU. You story was a wonderful blend of action, plot, and psychoanalysis of the Winchester boys.

Thank you for sharing with us!
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[identity profile] laura-trekkie.livejournal.com 2009-12-24 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Great ending! Just enough to keep the feds wondering, yet not enough to really be sure about what they saw.

Better yet, Meg got sent packing once again and Sam and Dean are back on the road together.

Merry Christmas and thanks for an entertaining read.

Laura.

[identity profile] kelpietree.livejournal.com 2009-12-25 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
this was fantastic. i had so much fun reading it!!!! All in one go and Christmas day to boot. Bad bad me. but good writing. Thankyou.

[identity profile] kelpietree.livejournal.com 2009-12-25 05:25 am (UTC)(link)
ih and i forgot to say: you Cas and Jimmy were perfect.

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2009-12-25 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Great stuff! I've never watched Criminal Minds, but all that profiling stuff you had them saying rang very true. Loved the way you tied it all into the Winchesters' world. The depiction of Castiel and Jimmy's separate reactions to the whole situations was also priceless.

This fic is definitely a keeper!

[identity profile] menatarms.livejournal.com 2009-12-26 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
This was a great story. I only know Supernatural, but I loved all the characters here. It was nice to see Jimmy get some screen time, and to have him still be alive. I loved all of Castiel's 'interrogation' and Raphael adding his own way of persuasion. I loved when Raphael listened to and saved Sharon, and the proof of the differences in the vampire teeth at the end as a tangible piece that it wasn't all a delusion.

I loved Dean and Sam and how the CM cast saw their issues and how messed up they come across (and are). I also loved the initial profile we see of Dean and how on the ball they are as to the Winchesters psychology, minus the reality of actual supernatural monsters. I liked the moments they brought up, like Dean killing the police officer in No Rest For the Wicked, and how that would come across. Poor Dean, he gets another officer death pinned on him here, too! Thanks for posting this!

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