Art beta needed

Working on my art for the reverse bang. It's a drawing of Dean. Anyone feel like playing art beta for me, so I can get rid of at least the worst of errors? Just want to see if I get this right, if not I'll probably just go with a manip.

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At this point I'm just too pissed to calmly discuss the American election. I'm not American, so it'll be a while before we start seeing immediate consequences of this gigantic mistake. But I feel so sorry for all the women,members of minorities and LGBT people who are going to suffer because of this.